tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1444744409791233743.post8348840185616481192..comments2022-11-14T16:18:34.387-05:00Comments on ALL A-QUIVER: WALKING THE STRAIGHT ’N ARROW: Devonhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/02838547497014663574noreply@blogger.comBlogger6125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1444744409791233743.post-27925943827484549992013-01-20T05:30:51.255-05:002013-01-20T05:30:51.255-05:00Hi there, Krisztina. Welcome! Nice to have you dro...Hi there, Krisztina. Welcome! Nice to have you drop by. :) Ah, WIPs . . . and editing. Yes. It's so hard to remember to include all of the senses, especially in first, or second, or even third drafts. With so much going on -- plot-wise, character-wise -- and making sure everything fits together properly, I wonder if adding in descriptions involving the other senses isn't best left until say, oh . . . the tenth revision or so. Lol! But yeah, to round everything out for the reader, a variety of senses work so well. :) Devonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02838547497014663574noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1444744409791233743.post-18058343042181178432013-01-19T18:47:53.741-05:002013-01-19T18:47:53.741-05:00Excellent point!! Shit, I don't think I referr...Excellent point!! Shit, I don't think I referred to smells anywhere in my WIP yet. I'm visual, so I'm sure I left out all the other senses.Krisztina Cliftonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10083709968500243900noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1444744409791233743.post-28313965290700372602013-01-16T19:16:29.611-05:002013-01-16T19:16:29.611-05:00Thank you very much, William! Yeah, it's hard ...Thank you very much, William! Yeah, it's hard to get used to at first, but involving all the senses is so, so important in writing. :D Glad you'd stopped by . . . and left a comment. Have a chocolate chip cookie. :)Devonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02838547497014663574noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1444744409791233743.post-24586351560051254382013-01-16T18:17:31.402-05:002013-01-16T18:17:31.402-05:00Excellent article!
I think one sense that I'v...Excellent article!<br /><br />I think one sense that I've probably neglected might be the sense of smell. And I can think of a couple spots in my ms where I can add a mention...William Kendallhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00331324250821836822noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1444744409791233743.post-2736770654891383882013-01-16T11:42:09.913-05:002013-01-16T11:42:09.913-05:00Ooo! Yay. Thank you for reading, Monica. :) I had ...Ooo! Yay. Thank you for reading, Monica. :) I had a lot of fun writing the article, way back when. :D Glad you liked it.Devonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02838547497014663574noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1444744409791233743.post-87644313086696136012013-01-16T11:13:44.085-05:002013-01-16T11:13:44.085-05:00Great article! Gave me a lot to think about, in k...Great article! Gave me a lot to think about, in kind of a 'duh...why haven't I ever thought of that before' kind of way.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18415409160831356141noreply@blogger.com